高考英語作文預(yù)測(cè)(五):留言條
留言條
假設(shè)你是李華,星期天你要和你的同班同學(xué)李明一起去敬老院參加義務(wù)勞動(dòng),你去找他,但他沒有在家 ,你給他留言說明要求,內(nèi)容如下:
(1)9:30在學(xué)校門口集合;
(2)帶勞動(dòng)工具(洗衣粉、理發(fā)工具、除草工具等);
(3)自帶午飯,騎自行車前往。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)100左右;(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Li Ming,
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Li Hua
【猜題理由】2010年高考寫作題應(yīng)該是學(xué)生較為熟悉的、身邊的與他們生活、學(xué)習(xí)密切相關(guān)的話題。因?yàn)楦呖加幸欢ǖ倪B續(xù)性,2010年有些省份仍可能采用應(yīng)用文進(jìn)行考查。
【構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥】本題屬于提綱式要點(diǎn)作文,要求學(xué)生就所給內(nèi)容寫一張留言條,是學(xué)生比較熟悉的題材,體現(xiàn)了英語學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該注意實(shí)用性,生活化的原則。應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn): (1)注意人稱,應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給同學(xué)李明(第二人稱)寫便條:(2)注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用:從試題的內(nèi)容上可以看出在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)上應(yīng)用將來時(shí);(3)注意恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語,是各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達(dá)不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細(xì)組織語言,合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明了,開門見山。
【參考范文】
Dear Li Ming,
This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.
Li Hua